Together

Kinda happy

When I am thinking about you
all my dreams come true
when you hold me tight
the sky turns more more bright
the smell of your skin feels like home
and I am no longer alone
you have won my love forever
let's try try to stay together

Reviews

[Caroline B A Maguire]

My first question here jeff is did you find love once again after your 16 year relationship ended ? I hope so..your poems intrigue me..I love to hear people's stories..especially the love tales..thank you for sharing..Caroline 🙂

[John the Baptist]

Up until the last line, it sounds as though the speaker has found the love of his life. In that line, however, the impression is given that all may not be well. Is something threatening what appears to be romantic bliss?

[LostSage]

John excellent observation.
I had to look at it again myself.
you made me think. read moreJohn excellent observation.
I had to look at it again myself.
you made me think.
yes yes thousands of things
are threatening that bliss
in the turbulence that is this world
if you get love
hold on to it as tight
as you can
have a superb day!

[Chris Shaw]

Delightfully romantic. A lovely tender piece of poetry. Nicely penned.

Chris

[LostSage]

The opinion of sweet Chris from across the pond means so much to me. I am surprised you pay any attention to me since I am just a boy from the colonies. have a sweet day!

[Carlos Lorenzo Estrada]

The aspirations of love and the growing of a tender relationship are painted well in this piece of poetry. Thank you my friend for sharing your art.

[LostSage]

Your thoughts are of great value my friend
thank you