storm girl

playing with my friends

look how bright
that mystery girl shines
like the moon in the sky
i think she knows
she captured my eye
she likes to play games a little
but not too rough
she is soft and warm
a safe place to stay
in the storm

Author's Note

type away I need lots of attention

Reviews

[barleygirl]

Your poem reminds me of the kind of person who really doesn't want to be going out or spending time with this admired other, but just being satisfied to sit back & admire & fantasize a little (((HUGS)))

[Chris Shaw]

Well I hope you get lots of attention from storm girl. She should be pleased to get a poem written for her. Nice romantic write. Hope your day is good or even better than good. All the best from across the pond.

Chris

[LostSage]

yep this was written for someone here on this website... I promised her I would write her, her own poem... it came out nice... I'll give you a clue... she has a Irish accent... I should write something just for you... it won't be as romantic but it will something like cherishing a close friend... inspiration is all I need... you got your own poem on the way

[Chris Shaw]

What a thoughtful poet you are and wise too. Friends are valuable, treasure of a different kind :)

[Caroline B A Maguire]

Wow ..she's a lucky girl to have captured your eye so much that you wrote such a lovely poem for her..I hope her storm is raging passion. Within her storm would be a safe place for you both .thank you for this enjoyable romantic stroll..Caroline 🙂