Submission

I submit

you have total control

for once I won’t worry

in case it all goes wrong.

Lead the way

all I have to do is follow, 

thinking for tonight and

 not question tomorrow.

Finally, 

the choice is no longer mine.

Finally, 

I surrender.

So take me, 

take everything 

that you need from me

Use me, 

for your pleasure 

and for your pain.

What’s left of me 

is yours

and in return

I give you me. 

Reviews

[Chris]

Part of a poem -

"The Master's miss..."

'Kneeling', My miss -
is ever your total freedom,
My acceptance -
your ultimate caress.

Chris

[Laura Kate]

Love this Chris, thank you

[Lyn Anderson]

Submission can be sexy, but for some reason the closing makes this feel like more than that. It feels a little unsettling ...

[Laura Kate]

Thanks for sharing your thoughts Lyn, much appreciated

[Edie Blue Starfish]

Some believe submission is the ultimate in love and trust but this sounds sad, like giving up and giving in.

[Laura Kate]

Interesting interpretation Edie, thank you