Forever

I think of you

every day the sky is blue

I've dreamt of you

every night the stars shone bright

I miss you

in every moment the Earth turns

and I'll love you

for as long as the Sun burns.

Reviews

[Einstein Noodle]

love the form you created .. steps of love and romance! ;) i think your use of a day and a night works .. really like "....as long as the Sun burns" in closing .. i feel that burn on my skin in reading ..., for me it brings to bear all the enduring passion that true love can generate ... simple words, little fanfare and flowers but deep in sentiments and for me very emotive .. nice one ma'am!
E.

[Laura Kate]

Thank you so much, E :)
I'm really happy to read your thoughts particularly regarding the sun and enduring passion. Thanks for reading!
Laura.

[Ballpark Frank]

This is super sweet and romantic. Very well penned.

[Laura Kate]

Thank you, Frankie :) Lovely to see you here, best wishes, Laura.

[jacob erin-cilberto]

This is such a romantic interlude...

and read from the bottom of the staircase up it makes just as much sense...

nice reflection like off of the water.
j.

[Laura Kate]

Thank you, Jacob, much appreciated.
Laura.

[Chris Shaw]

Twenty four hour clock. Speaks to me of forever love. There is a great deal of heartache and missing someone in these lines. A lovely piece of brevity Laura.

Chris

[Laura Kate]

Thank you, Chris. I really appreciate your reads and reviews.
Laura.

[Chris Shaw]

It is great having you back Laura to share your poetry. I hope you stay.

[Laura Kate]

Thank you, Chris, I appreciate that. I'm not even sure where I've been..! It's great to be back :)

[Chris Shaw]

Sometimes we go through periods in our life like that. Maybe we need to do that to allow for healing to begin. It's always good to come back from the wilderness :)

[Laura Kate]

Absolutely it is :)