In Front of the Fireplace Tonight.

In dancing flames with outstretched arms you're standing, waiting there, 

one last kiss and one last hug but how do I get there? 

Make a wish or say a prayer 

but I'm still here and you're still there.

Our worlds will never meet, 

a fate too hard to bare.

Reviews

[Jazique]

You rhyme, you're short, you're simple, and you make sense. I'm giving two thumbs up to one you can't seem to be with no matter how bad you want to. Anyways well done.

[Neon]

Awwm Loury .. you've got a very cool heart. I enjoyed this lovely poem. You should write some more lines on it.. it'd be cool if you do write :) The life can't be completed without love and love and love .. and the love can't be completed without someone who truly knows the worth of love, worth of pain, who understands very well the feeelings of Woman's heart with whom he's in love .. and so on ...

Your stuffs're cool, Loury..keep penning. Your a coolest writer. I'd suggest you to write some big stuffs too on such kinda pieces because your stuffs're really very measurable, realistic and meaningful :)

[Lourisa]

You are right. Life is all about love and connection. But it's also about loss and learning to cope with it. Thanks for your very kind words. It's always great hearing your view.

[Samuel Jack]

A love unconquerable, very sad. But it makes for an interesting poem. Good stuff!

[Kenneth The Poet]

Very sweet. The brevity of the piece makes for a bigger emotional punch, and I think you succeeded greatly.

[Judy Ponceby]

Wistful and full of feeling... I like "dancing flames". :) Well done :)