Yes, I cut.

poem

 Yes, I cut and as I bleed,

the world just seems easier to me.

Rumors,Lies, and Words so hurtful,

What makes someone truely worthful?

Yes I cut, and as I bleed,

The world just seems easier to me.

                     

Sad days and lonely nights,

 All the times we had our fights.

The words you said to me all were true,

I guess the truth is I still love you.

 

Yes, I cut and as I bleed,

The world just seems easier to me.

 

Reviews

[Matthews Reggie]

Small but perfect, a sad poem... The repeating line 'Yes,I cut and as I bleed and 'the world just seems easier to me' were powerful, creative and emotional... But the only defect I can point out is that minus the repeat lines, the poem is only 8 lines and very few ideas.... But ignore it, this poem is a work of excellence... Work of creativity... Keep it up...

[SenoritaAriii<3]

This is a really good poem, its sad, but you made it so we can understand why the person cuts. I can really connect to this, I understand what this is like, and it's a really sucky feeling. I hope you'r nawt still doing this, nd if you are, i hope you get better!!! think of it this way: why should you hurt because of a feeling that started with someone else? i think that this gives you the right to hit that a*****e untill your hands bleed(: Happy punching(: