A Hidden Heart

Short variation of a poem I have already written. Doesn't rhyme at the end, awkward...I know.

There is a heart that must be free to fly

That burns with a need to know the reason why.

Why must we always conceal....

.....what we think and how we feel?

 

Must there be a secret me?

Why am I forced to hide?

Author's Note

tell me what you think =]

Reviews

[Momo the Elf]

yay! short version? you should put up the longer version!!! but ah the message in this poem is so deep, and i can completely relate to it. don't worry if it doesn't rhyme at the end, actually it gives it a nice affect. ^^

[caliban]

i liked it, and the non-rhyming at the end was fine in my opinion