scream

Held helplessly to the bed

 

He starts totouch I struggle

 

but I cant break free

 

tears pour from my eyes as he lays his heavy body on top of me

 

scream I shout scream my thoughts are clear

 

but I'm terrified to be hurt

 

scream I shout scream one last touch and ill be done

 

the horror spills from my mouth

 

scream I shout scream but now I feel sick gross broken and lost

 

all is over he runs out the door

 

is it really over

 

or are these sleepless nights still to come

Reviews

[Arly Parent]

This is REALLY nicely written but I think it would flow amazingly well if you added different line breaks

Held helplessly to the bed

He starts to touch
*I struggle

but I cant break free

tears pour from my eyes as he lays his heavy body on top of me

scream, I shout
* scream
*my thoughts are clear

but I'm terrified to be hurt

scream, I shout
*scream
*one last touch and ill be done

the horror spill(s)*? from my mouth

scream, I shout
*scream
but now I feel sick, gross broken and lost

all is over
he runs out the door

is it really over

or are these sleepless nights still to come


Beautiful ending by the way. Poignant and painful. I really like this. And I wish no one ever had to deal with anything like the subject. But they do. Thanks for writing about it.

[Cheyenne Delay]

thank you I wrote this last year while waiting to talk to the police I thought I'd share it for every one to and thank you this will help me a lot.

[Arly Parent]

Hope you're doing OK. It's been 8 months since I wrote my review. I really hope you're feeling like the badass you seem to be.

[Cheyenne Delay]

just been dealing with a lot I'm going to try and continue to write on here It really helps me escape

[Arly Parent]

You never get more than you can handle. I don't know you but i'm completely confident in you for some reason. Oddities, eh? Hope today was a good day.