You Sure Are Something

Emerald green eyes staring at me
Make me feel lost in a magical forest.
The sun seems to shine
Every time you flash that smile.
Words don’t come easy
When I try to speak.
I think this was love at first sight.

Those lips look so inviting;
They’d be better on mine.
You are what I’ve been searching for.
You’re so sweet,
I want to take a bite out of you.
A picture of you is saved in my memory.
You must have been heaven sent.

I am thoroughly amazed
By your every move.
Do you ever get tired
From being in my mind all night?

Can you help me up?
I’ve fallen for you,
And I need help getting up.
I’m still longing
For that kiss.

I’ll admit that
I wish every night for you.
Baby, I can see us together.
I think this was love at first sight.

Author's Note

I wrote this last year. It's not my best, but I like it.

Reviews

[LisetteCanWrite!]

Wow ... I really liked this one.. the flow and emotions running through.. really caught my attention. I could feel that sense of love at first sight.. although I don't trust those types of emotions personally (I run from that as I know it is usually lust). There definitely is attraction at first sight.. and if we spend more time with a person as such we either learn we dislike them or are more attracted to other qualities as well. Real love takes a very long time.. it is weathered through bad and good.. living with flaws as well as the qualities. I still love the passion embedded in this.. great work .. keep it up! =)