Fairy Tale Land

I wrote this when I was, again, nine. It's kind of odd, considering if how you study it, it seems like "Brick By Boring Brick" by Paramore was the inspiration. Heh-heh, years before it came out, Y'all!

I found a Demon
In My Safest Haven...
I Hide Myself in My Fairytale...
I Hide Myself in My Own Aiden...

I Live in My Own Land...
So Far Away...
Butterflies, Tearing off the Wings...
Mocking Birds, The Sarcastics that Sing.
Always Destroyed and Crying...
Always Depression and Hopeless Reccession...
Always a Bunch of Lies, A Harsh Demise...
A Painful Addiction, A Sadness of Affliction....

My Depressed Little Fairytale Land...
My Built Up World of Magic...
To Escape the Real World, So Tragic...
To Escape the Pain, So Acidic...
To Escape theLife, So Un Monolithic.

My Land is Worse than the Real...
But The Truth Helps Me Feel...
Unlike the Lies of this Horrible Real...
I Can Take The Truth, Put Away The Hurt...
Lock It up, Forced it to Be Sealed...
And Walk in the Midst of My Demonic World...
Preambulating the Black Hills...
Wondering Through the Realms...

A Fairy Tale Land in my Mind...
In My World, I'm not Forced to Be Kind...
A Fairy Tale Land of Depression...
A Fairy Tale Land of Hopeless Recession.
A Fairy Tale Land with No First Impression.

My Fairy Tale Land...

Reviews

[Sam]

Wow! I really liked your poem. It had good rhythm, and rhyme: and I especially liked the meaning behind it. Good job!

[deeps]

I found a Demon
In My Safest Haven...
I Hide Myself in My Fairytale...
I Hide Myself in My Own Aiden...

I so loved these lines here,
This is a wonderful write here,
Such wonderful flow.
You have talent.

[Star Shyne]

Being able to write such poems at age nine is simply fantastic! You have talent! great job!