I hope

I hope

A Poem by DarkInside
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Just read it. Hopeless crushes ftw. (written last year.)

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I hope that one day you find someone who loves you the way I do
I hope that when you see to them you become too nervous to speak
Your breath hitches in your throat and your hands become shaky 
I hope that when you see them smile it makes your heart flutter 
And brightens up your day
And when you see that they're sad you're able to make them happy

I hope that one day you will be content with them
Holding their hand
Going on dates with them
Just being with them

I hope that one day you'll gain the courage to make them yours
I hope that you will last for as long as possible

I admit I hope that it is me

© 2015 DarkInside


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Gee
Aww,how sweet.Very well expressed.Well done

Posted 10 Years Ago


DarkInside

10 Years Ago

Thank you c:
Comes straight from the heart, you can feel the pain from the crush. I have a story Lovesick about that pain, can you let me know what you think of it ? Well done.

Posted 10 Years Ago


DarkInside

10 Years Ago

Thank you and of course.
I really liked this poem because it was just you saying what you think and feel. You opened up and I thought it was great.

Posted 10 Years Ago


DarkInside

10 Years Ago

Thank you c:
Yes, I remember those feelings quite well. Beautiful poem! It has a nice flow to it and glides off the tongue when read aloud. Thank you for sharing!

Posted 10 Years Ago


DarkInside

10 Years Ago

Awh, thank you. Glad you liked it c:
I know those feelings I feel them to. Crushes are bitter sweet.

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

DarkInside

10 Years Ago

Indeed they are.

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Added on September 25, 2015
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