Soul-mate

The want of love, the search of love, and the promise of love.

Who wouldn't love for someone to hold?

Someone to love you without being told.

Everywhere I look, people are alone,

Why, to them, is no love shown?

Why say to love "no more searching, I'm done,"

If there is a soul-mate for everyone?

Reviews

[Archia]

I liked the meaning in this, it was short and sweet. The rhyme was quite nice, it didn't come across as forced and gave it a nice flow.

[Who Cares]

I like the last two lines alot, they are beautiful. Twas a nice though and a very well written short poem. Nice job

[Rae Emeral]

I really like this! It's not very long, but holds a lot of meaning. Awesome! :)
~Rae Emeral

[Angelic Surrender]

So true :) good work :)

[AndyJCash]

Ah, there's such a solemn feeling to this poem with a very serious question most people worry about but allow to slip on by. The rhyming scheme is wonderful and the questions keep the reader involved and thinking. Good stuff :)

[Tasha]

This was great and I loved the rhythm.
♥ Ta'Shandra