Drive into the sea...

They told me to write about you 
I couldn't.
All that came to my mind was 
Pain, abandonment, b*****d... 

My pen won't move 
It won't let me write 
It moves on its own and the only 
thing it writes is your name 
It writes a word and scribbles it over and over again, until the words overlap each other.

It wrote a memory once 
It practically drew us 
We screamed, I hit you
You threw me the keys 
And told me to drive as fast as I can
if I loved you enough 
I would drive into the sea 
And drown.

You said you won't save me.

I remember crying over you and I don’t mean a couple of tears and I’m blue. I’m talking about collapsing and screaming at the moon. 

Reviews

[Sasha]

Wow.. I know how you feel .. been through the same thing :/

"I remember crying over you and I don’t mean a couple of tears and I’m blue. I’m talking about collapsing and screaming at the moon " .

Beautiful !

[La Luna]

Awww thank you Sasha I'm glad you know the feeling.

[Sasha]

your most welcome :)

[Lydia Shutter]

The emotions are powerful in this well written piece. You have truly painted the scene with your imagery. Writing does help. It is a catharsis. Lydi**

[La Luna]

Thank you very much Lydia :)