He Said...

A Poem by La Luna

Walk gracefully 
Don't shame me 
Stop 
Don't talk without my permission 

Who told you to look 
Lower your gaze 
Walk 
Don't stop without my permission 

I give you life
And I take It 
There's nothing you can do

Your confidence is mine 
Your beauty is mine 
Your soul is mine 
Every part of you is mine 

I told you before you cannot exist without my permission.

© 2014 La Luna

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Saddam

Your confidence is mine
Your beauty is mine
Your soul is mine
Every part of you is mine
This is like a spiritual poem...the father of a humans ordered. Actually we need this kind of order now a day. Love the way you create this.

Posted 11 Years Ago

1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

11 Years Ago

Thank you very much :)

11 Years Ago

you are welcome dear.

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La Luna

London, United Kingdom

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Hi. My name is Luna, I believe in many things, and I find many things beautiful in this world, at first i never cared, but when I started writing I observed every Scene that was around me. One being p.. more..