Humans.

You speak so loud, you have no self-control 
why are you scared, 
scared the world will see us 
I just want you to claim me 
Is that so hard?

Why do you look so dull
Where is the fire I once saw 
Where is that colour of danger I once smelt 
You adventured me once
I nearly lost myself in your world 

You made my air boil 
I never could breathe 
But that was fun 
You kissed me and inhaled life into me. 

But now everyone one tastes like you 
They all have that same feel 
you expire on that same date 
Never passing the breaking point 
Where is the climax in our story. 

You all excited me once 
But now I rather be dead 
I can't feel anything 
I wish there was something to light this empty room. 

Sigh 
I'm tired of loving humans... 

 

Author's Note

This is kinda different to what i usually write. But it made sense in my mind, i hope it does to you to :).

Reviews

[Roger Turgeon]

Interesting. Sort of like growing up and no longer feeling the thrill of an amusement park ride. I hope you find a way to love again...humans that is.

[La Luna]

Thank you. I hope so to...

[Ai Lun]

It's a good poem and shows potential. Well done Luna! And it's always good to try new things when it comes to poetry, as it helps us grow as writers and ultimately find our own unique way of writing :)

[La Luna]

Thank you for noticing, and yeah that's the best thing about poetry there is no right or wrong. :)