The Sea

“My soul is full of longing for the secret of the sea, and the heart of the great ocean sends a thrilling pulse through me.” ― Henry Wadsworth Longfellow

I've never been to the sea. But I imagine it to be wide and vast. 
Sometimes I close my eyes and imagine the waves fighting, like two worlds that have seen so much. 

Reviews

[Pól]

Not bad
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[La Luna]

Thank you.

[Ranger Nadaly]

I like this piece, but I don't think the "soo" fits the poem. The writing style and narration isn't informal so the informal "soo" stands out, maybe just keep it "so".

[La Luna]

Thank you, I was wondering what was missing/odd. :)

[Aethereal]

Those waves don't fight till they bite the shoreline. The sea and the land are the two worlds in conflict.

[La Luna]

I like that. But this was a comparison to human beings in a strange way. :)