Exploring The Sea

When she drowned in the blue sea, she saw the man she loved to deep. And when the sea seeped her pain, it showed her, her heart. But moments later he dragged her and bruised her lips with the softness of his tongue exploring her mouth like the way their body was exploring the sea.

Author's Note

I don't really know what i was trying to produce here lol, but my mood seemed to fit the words.

Reviews

[Everett DeValle]

Sensually erotic...I definitely love the use of analogy of the sea and the realm of the physical world. Nicely done.

[La Luna]

Thank you, Everett. Your review means a lot ;)

Luna

[Everett DeValle]

Don't mention it...it was my pleasure reading your poem. And you are most welcome. :)