Streets of Winter

A Poem by Luuucy

short poem about being trapped and overlooked... imagine homeless people in winter

bundled bodies

shrouded in steam

thawing

soaking

you leave

you freeze

© 2016 Luuucy

Author's Note

a super short poem, tell me what you think!

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Very powerful! Such truth........... My late father was homeless most of his adult life.

Posted 10 Years Ago

10 Years Ago

Thank you... I can't even begin to understand the struggle but I am touched that it spoke to you per.. read more

Lyn Anderson

Really good, strongly conveys the feeling, with very few words.

Posted 10 Years Ago

10 Years Ago

Thank you!

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Added on March 20, 2016
Last Updated on March 20, 2016

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Luuucy

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I got to a point where I forgot that I loved to write, and thought that I had to change that. It's therapy for me, but even better if it can inspire others. more..