Streets of Winter

short poem about being trapped and overlooked... imagine homeless people in winter

bundled bodies

shrouded in steam

thawing

soaking

you leave

you freeze

Author's Note

a super short poem, tell me what you think!

Reviews

[1]

Very powerful! Such truth........... My late father was homeless most of his adult life.

[Luuucy]

Thank you... I can't even begin to understand the struggle but I am touched that it spoke to you personally

[Lyn Anderson]

Really good, strongly conveys the feeling, with very few words.

[Luuucy]

Thank you!