in your dreams

it's friday!

“dancing queen” by dyanne parker

courtesy of etsy.com dyanneparkerart

my red dress
will hang
on the chair
beside you
leaving me
in only
ivory skin
pouty lips
and a hint of jasmine

penetrating desire
will embrace us
as dionysus
winks from
the mirror
channeling secrets
of carnal pleasure

just for tonight
let me lie down
in your dreams
where threads
of passion
will meander
‘tween fibers of lust
and all will be right
with the world

Reviews

[MsJewel]

my red dress
will hang
on the chair
beside you
leaving me
in only
ivory skin
pouty lips
and a hint of jasmine...

Your Friday night writes are just as passionate on a Wednesday night.
This is so simple and yet so softly sensual and elegant...I am speechless. You have outdone yourself.

:) Julie

[Lydia Shutter]

Thank you sweet friend of mine. I so appreciate your reviews. Lydi**

[Shaquana Adams]

What a well written poem. I love poems with good imagery. The fact that it falls in the dream category just made me nod my head even more.

[Lydia Shutter]

Thank you very much, Shaquana. Lydi**

[Cassie]

This is yet another piece of yours with good imagery in it. Good job

[Lydia Shutter]

So pleased you enjoyed. Thanks, Cassie. Lydi**

[Madison O'Dwyer]

The imagery here and the underlying yearning for all to be right was so beautifully entwined.
"just for tonight
let me lie down
in your dreams
where threads
of passion
will meander
‘tween fibers of lust"
This was a stunning and strong stanza to end on. I loved it. Thanks for sharing :)

[Lydia Shutter]

Thanks very much, Madison. Lydi**

[Sheila Kline]

I'm getting to this after Friday has passed but I have a feeling the red dress will be ready for another night of sensual delight - perhaps before the next one! Your words are seductive enough to make that mirror hide its face.......lol
I love it!!

[Lydia Shutter]

Smiling here.....thanks so much for the review, Sheila. May YOUR red dress hang on a special chair tonight. Lydi**

[John Alexander McFadyen]

This is so sensual yet loving it brought tears to my eyes Lydi

[Lydia Shutter]

Thanks so much for the review, John....sorry for the tears! Lydi**

[Joyce S. Greene]

Another Friday night delight from a master of romantic poetry! This is one very hot poem, Lydi. I enjoyed reading it very much - as usual, your imagery is stunning.

[Lydia Shutter]

Thanks so much, Joyce. Lydi**

[paddy d daly]

''and all will be right
with the world'
romantic and heartfelt
maybe it is something we
should all strive for, grace and beauty
should never be underestimated

[Lydia Shutter]

You know it, Paddy. Thanks for the review. Lydi**

[Shaun Payton]

Wonderful poetry yes...a lovers dream sequence.

[Lydia Shutter]

Thank you, Shaun. Lydi*

[Shaun Payton]

You are welcome Lydi:)

[Dean]

The kind of very personal poem, that nevertheless fits any lover, or would-be lover--an "all-purpose" objet d'arte that lets the world identify.

[Lydia Shutter]

Thank you so much, Dean. I appreciate your review. Lydi**