yes

the blue lady” by monique edwards

courtesy of paintoutsidethelines of etsy.com

when the storms of my summer

triumph over my usual aplomb

you allow me to take shelter

beneath your branches of wisdom

when dusk and twilight

become sullen darkness

the light in your eyes sparkles

leading me to a better place

through darkened twisting lanes

you will always be the light in the window

at the end of my path

yes, mon amour, i love you

Reviews

[Aethereal]

I enjoyed how you arranged this love poem into three distinct parts: First he’s a protective tree, second he’s the moon and stars piercing the darkness that enfolds around you, and third he’s a guide helping you navigate through the maze of life. Each verse has four orderly lines that stick to the same subject without straying.

[Lydia Shutter]

Thank you so much. Lydi**

[Rita L. Sev]

you will always be the light in the window
at the end of my path...

What a beautiful sentiment! Lovely piece, Lydi!

[Lydia Shutter]

Thank you very much, Rita. Lydi**

[Sami Khalil]

Note: The art work is amazing.....:)................

[Sami Khalil]

A better place indeed when love embraces us from all the sullen darkness of the world; when the branches of wisdom overshadow our beings and when Lydia leads her readers beneath the shelter of sparkling romance. A wonderful write.
Note: just preference for the font was too big for a lovely romance poem...Splendid...:).............

[Lydia Shutter]

Smiling here....I think the font size is due to my aging eyesight! :) Thank you for the wonderful review and for the mention of the artwork as well. I appreciate this, Sami. Lydi**

[Sami Khalil]

You are welcome muchly...:).................