jigsaw world

it's friday night

artwork courtesy of pinterest

the flavor of your words
ah, the way they tickle my tongue with sweetness
leaving me breathless
indeed, like chocolate coated delicacies to savor
through starry nights and sun drenched dawns

ever on the cusp of affection
                 i teeter
like a wide brimmed hat on a windy day

the water colored edges of my life
burst into vibrant color when we are together
then hang over the mantle of my world

such a sweet reminder
of how well we fit together
in this crazy jigsaw world

Reviews

[redzone]

ah Lydi, when the pieces fit together, when "the water colored edges of my life / burst into vibrant color when we are together", the world may be a "crazy jigsaw", but a beautiful word puzzle comes to life... those 'chocolate flavored words' so sweet and well spoken do play havoc on a tongue... the kind of havoc only a perfect fit can create... and that teetering hat will stay on your head even in the storms of love!!

Lydi, you write such exquisite tasting love poems, they are just too hard to resist, so I just savor those chocolate words and sigh a 'NICE' sigh!! What a treat on a Saturday morning...

redzone

[Lydia Shutter]

I hope your entire weekend is sweet, Curt. Thanks for the review. Lydi**

[R.M.C]

A wonderfully imaginative piece. You're description is very thought provoking and effortlessly captures deeper meanings that at times seem as if words have not been created to describe them. My personal favorite part is right at the end: "how well we fit together in this crazy jigsaw world". It really does capture the complexities and multiple levels to life.

[Lydia Shutter]

Thank you very much, R.M.C. Lydi**

[jacob erin-cilberto]

i like how the edges hang over the mantle...

and this world has so many of those edges that don't fit with other edges....when we can find someone who fits perfectly with us...

there is no puzzle...just a solution.

nicely done.

[Lydia Shutter]

Thanks very much, Jacob. Enjoy the weekend. Lydi**