and believe

artwork by roy pederson                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                             

sit down right here with me

talk about nothing for hours

or talk about something

just stay here

be with me

reflect on the good things

and believe

i want to be one of them

Reviews

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Your picture depicts the real meaning of the poem. Sitting beside the vast and lofty nature can make us forget everything... Every pain or every lowness of life. We are among this nature, just a part of it can make us forget everyday life.... This is just awesome

[Lydia Shutter]

Sima, thank you so much for the review. Lydi**

[Light and ashes]

Wow, this is so nice, Lydia, great job.

[Lydia Shutter]

I appreciate your review! Lydi**

[Light and ashes]

You're welcome! :)

[Chris Shaw]

I am wondering whether this is a follow on poem to your Betrayal? It seems connected, and I sense here a desire to get baggage sorted however long it takes. The final three lines speak to me. I get a real sense here that the air needs to clear and for that betrayal to be smoothed over, even if not forgotten. You know, I found this very relatable Lydi**, other readers will too.

Chris

[Lydia Shutter]

Your take on the poem was not my intention, but, yes, it could seem that way. I am honored you remember the other one I wrote! Thank you so much, Chris. Have a great weekend. Lydi**