Fall

Another go !!!!

Silence crashes fluttering,

Boughs shiver drying,

Leaves fall gently.

Reviews

[Sami Khalil]

A wonderful short poem. Bravo....

[Adreamer's Bluejay]

Was this supposed to be a haiku? If so it is excellently crafted and the syllable count is spot on while the story is amazingly delicate. It feels as though you are saying something much more personal than just describing nature, but either way very well done. the middle line is by far my favorite. excellently penned

[ANM]

Thank you for your review I am glad you enjoyed it and yes it was a Haiku.

[Matching Socks]

Beautiful words, sweet little poem.

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[ANM]

Just like me ha ha