Moonbeam

Haiku attempt...

Moonbeam downward falling,

Softening nights mantle.

Waymarked to dawn.

Reviews

[Sami Khalil]

I like this a lot. Thank you for sharing...:).....

[Adreamer's Bluejay]

The imagery here is amazing, I really love the way you penned this with such a unique word choice and such strength for being so short. excellent write :)

[ANM]

Thank you glD you read this!

[Adreamer's Bluejay]

no problem, absolutely love it :)

[ANM]

-).........

[Matching Socks]

What a darling little un-haiku. :)

[ANM]

Yes I think it is though I believe when writing in English the form can be adjusted. Thank you for your review.

[Matching Socks]

You dummy. :)
I told you it was 5-7-5, plus double dummy for responding to KL's review outside of her review.
:P

[ANM]

................................(Mouth stitched up)................

[Matching Socks]

Lol. :)
Just here to make you feel good.

[ANM]

H ha anyway what the odd syllable between poets!!

[Matching Socks]

Exactly, a cute little un-haiku. :)

[Lyn Anderson]

I am no expert, but I thought it was supposed to be 5-7-5 -- It could be easily modified.