Iced Heart

War causes pain and taints good souls. Everyone should be aware of the consequences of war and fight hard against it :)

Good hearts turn cold
As cries of agony fills the air
Bloody bodies torn and bare 
Decorating the sands red and gory
Abandoned by angels but overthrown by devils
A good heart turns cold 
Cussing and swearing 
The stinky scent of war perfuming the mind 
As each step sucks you into poison
Poison of war and destruction 
The fist of hate squeezes the heart
Killing mercilessly the monster within you unleashed
The warmth of love long gone
Sucked into the spirals of war
As good heart turns cold

Author's Note

What do you think of the poem, powerful enough to drive a message across?

Reviews

[Matthew Smith]

It is powerful. The message is nice. Unfortunately, so long as there's any need for war, there will always be war. It's a shame more people don't think so optimistically.

[Breadrun]

Very powerful, if only the people in power had your views

[Orion Scarlett]

very forceful! You were able to portray your thought extremely well.