stained me

your heart has slipped away from me ; leaving my hands covered in blood from trying to hard
i tried to keep you close to me ; but your heart was beating for someone else
in my hands.
my hands stained with you ; with your memory
my heart still beats for you - only you ; forever ... you
still i think of the day your heart bled in my hands for her
left me holding onto your memory ; in my hands
stained with you.
your heart slipped away from me - stay with me?
she can have your heart ; i just need YOU here with me. :[
you've stained me.

Reviews

[Naomi Montana Walsh]

This reminds me of a song.. it's called love lays bleeding in my hands..
actually there is another one called hemorrage in my hands..yes it is true hoding to too tight to a heart that wants to go is a bloody mess..and you do tell the tale so well.. good job

[Brittany]

I like the idea of it. Good metaphor usage-I totally capture that the blood is what he's leaving behind of himself. I loved it :) Great Job.

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i tried to keep you close to me ; but your heart was beating for someone else

I LOVE that line! I am going through exactly that! You write with lots of emotion, and that is a great talent to have! I enjoyed this, even though it was a tear-jerker! Thanks for sharing!