With You

It has to do with the person your with. It's telling how someone can make you feel so amazing.

I write what I can't say a loud. I'm trying not to think about you, but I can't resist. My mind drifts to your slow smile, how it moves from your lips to your eyes - or is it reverse? How it lifts me from my ordinary self. When we're talking and others join us, when you laugh with them, I feel tangled up, angry. I struggle not to be rude. I want to be alone with you. I love our aloneness. When I listen to music, I imagine slow dancing with you, and you whisper, "You are my one true love," and I smile. I now know why people write music, paint, and dance, lifted as if they can fly. Because this ache crashing inside needs to be free. Sometimes, love becomes a melody others hum for years.

Reviews

[ron]

This is beautiful. Love can do that to us, when we find the one that we fall completely in love with.

[Lynn12513]

Thank you for the lovely comment. And yes, I do agree with you love can do many things on people.

[ron]

You are most welcome.

[Warren Daniel II]

I could relate to this poem "I love our
aloneness" is my favorite line, thanks for sharing.

[Lynn12513]

Thank you for the positive review :)

[Cristie Love]

Lovely, very relatable. Very sweet and touching :)

[Lynn12513]

Thank you very much :)

[Jamestown]

This is very sweet and heart felt, being in love is a sweet melody, well
said, hang in there you will get you alone time, thanks for sharing and b-blessed!

[Lynn12513]

Thank you so much :)