Of Course I'll Wait For You In HeavenA Story by Lyrical-LiesDeticated to the loss of my dad. I got inspiration from a certain song and started writing. Honestly I would sacrifice myself if that meant that he got to remain alive. I wish it didn't have to be this way. I love you dad.
The air around me is cold against my skin. I'm walking down a path; I feel the urge to run, but keep at my walking pace. There's leaves around me and they're crunching under my feet. I feel the coldness push up on my eyes, making them tear. It's cold fall weather around me and now all I feel is that something is going to be at the end of the path. I can't figure out where I'm going but the path keeps leading me on; I feel something as I continue to walk. The atmosphere around me is forestry. All of the leaves off of the trees, showing a white sky above me, the clouds had taken over. The path ends. There's a clearing. I walk and see an open feild with a lake. There's a dock at the end of the lake, and somebody is sitting there, staring out at the still water. It's a man; he's got on a coat and his back is to me as I walk up to him. My breathing slows as I creep on the dock. I tap the man on the shoulder. He stands up, his back still to me. "Excuse me s-" I stop talking as he turns around. It's my dad. Tears push up on my eyes and instantly I feel them streaming down my cheeks. He puts his thumb to my cheek and whipes away the tear, but I can't feel it. I sniffle and hug him tightly. "Of course I'll wait for you in heaven," He says to me. I look at him and his face is fading. I scream at him to stay but his figure is already in mist as he drifts into the sky. I fall to my knees and sit on the dock, taking the spot of where he'd been sitting just moments ago. The tears are falling down my cheeks as I look out into the horizon. I feel a tap on my shoulder and look up. My best friend is standing there with her arms folded shivering and she kneels down beside me. "What's wrong?" She asks, giving me a hug and whiping the tears. I shake my head. "Nothing," I whisper. "Common back home," she says rubbing my back, trying to comfort me. "I need to stay a little longer," I say. She nodded and stood up. "I'll be over there if you need me," she says. I nod then she walks away. I hug my knees and rest my head on them as I sit on the dock, looking up at the sky. "Of course I'll wait for you in heaven," He had said. I smiled numbly and let the tears trickle down my face before left the place that is even too good to take place in my dreams. © 2009 Lyrical-LiesAuthor's Note
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Added on October 12, 2009 AuthorLyrical-LiesCanadaAboutI'm thirteen and basically i'm the shy one that loves to express myself into creative writing and such. Thirteen is a crappy age; but I think that age shouldn't matter in creative writing. Honestly I .. more.. |

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