If I Were to Close my Eyes

If I were to close my eyes,
I wonder what I would see.
Would I be able to see through the lies,
Everyone keeps telling me?

Would my eyes view upon a river of tears,
Condensed clouds of gloom?
A hurricane of intimidating fears,
That leaves integrity no room?

Will there be a burnt out Sun,
A star that no longer shines.
Hearts getting corrupted, one by one,
Darkness, that defines.

Author's Note

Quite desolate, huh? Hope you like it though! :D

-Thanks, Lysta

Reviews

[Misery]

I like your poem, it leads me on a path of wondering. It also begs for a follow up poem, perhaps titled "When I Closed My Eyes". Nice inspiration, dear poet. I hope you will continue this theme.

[Lysta]

Thank you and I will probably take you up on your idea of a follow-up!

-Wishing You the Best, Lysta

[Misery]

You are welcome, dear poet; and thank you for your wish.