Forever Young

Forever Young

A Story by Mark Raines
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What if you could be forever young

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Dr. Aris Thorne lived in a quiet hum of bio-luminescent growth chambers and the rhythmic thrum of quantum processors. Her lab, a hermetically sealed sanctum beneath the sprawling, hyper-urban sprawl of Neo-Kyoto, was her universe. For three decades, her life had been a singular pursuit: unlocking the secret to cellular immortality. The human body, she believed, was a flawed machine, designed with an expiry date, and she intended to hack it.

The breakthrough came, as many do, in a flash of frustrated insight after years of dead ends. It wasn't a single gene, nor a cocktail of obscure compounds. It was a complete re-sequencing, a rewrite of the fundamental code that dictated senescence. A retrovirus, meticulously engineered, designed to integrate into the human genome, instructing every cell to perpetually reset its telomeres, repair all damage, and shed all age. Eternal youth. Eternal life.

Aris knew the risks. Animal trials had been promising, almost terrifyingly so. Mice lived for what would be centuries in human terms, agile and vibrant, their fur never dulling, their eyes never clouding. But no human had ever faced such a fundamental alteration.

She prepared herself with a methodical calm that belied the tremor in her hands. A single, gleaming syringe. The pale blue liquid shimmered under the lab lights. She sterilised the injection site on her forearm, took a deep breath, and plunged the needle in.

For weeks, nothing. Then, subtle changes. The faint lines around her eyes, etched by years of peering into microscopes, softened and vanished. Her skin, once prone to the occasional blemish, took on an almost porcelain quality. Her greying hair regained its youthful lustre, its original chestnut hue returning strand by strand. Her chronic back pain, a persistent companion since her late thirties, faded like a forgotten dream.

Within six months, Dr. Aris Thorne had not merely reversed her age; she had obliterated it. She was, to all outward appearances, thirty years old again. Her metabolism hummed with the efficiency of a finely tuned engine. Her mind, once sharp, was now a crystal-clear archive, her recall absolute, her capacity for learning seemingly infinite. She had achieved it. She was immortal.

The first decade was exhilarating. She read every book, mastered every instrument, learned every language. She watched political landscapes shift, technological marvels unfold. She stayed connected to her few living relatives �" a niece, then her grand-niece �" observing their lives, offering cryptic advice, always careful to maintain her façade of youthful middle age. She saw her peers age, their bodies growing frail, their minds dimming. She attended their funerals, a quiet, unchanging specter in the back row, a hollow ache beginning to form in her chest.

The second decade, the euphoria began to wane. The joy of discovery was finite. The thrill of new experiences dulled with repetition. She had loved the cello; now its melodies felt predictable. She had devoured history; now its narratives felt circular, humanity repeating its same triumphs and failures. She started to distance herself, becoming a ghost in the lives of those she cared for, lest her lack of aging become too obvious, too monstrous.

By the time two centuries had passed, the ache was a gaping wound. The world was a dizzying kaleidoscope of fleeting faces. Cities rose and fell, cultures blossomed and faded. She moved from identity to identity, from continent to continent, shedding aliases like old skin. Each connection she dared to make was a fresh heartbreak, a cruel countdown to their inevitable decay. She loved an artist for fifty years, watched his magnificent art reflect the passage of time, then watched him wither. She befriended a linguist, only to see her succumb to a plague that Aris's perfected immune system shrugged off.

Her mind, once a crystalline archive, began to change. Not decay, but a terrifying saturation. Every memory, every detail of every conversation, every sensation she had ever experienced, was perfectly preserved. There was no forgetting, no fading. Thousands of years of data, stacked endlessly, layered and overlapping. Distinguishing between a conversation from 1842 and one from 2217 became a conscious effort, a mental excavation. Sleep brought no respite; her dreams were a chaotic maelstrom of millennia, a cacophony of voices and faces.

Her beautiful, unchanging body became a cage. She could never truly rest. She could never truly be free. She tried to end it, once, in a moment of profound despair. She stepped into the path of a hyper-train, a blur of silent speed. The impact splintered her bones, tore flesh, but the regenerative process, her blessing and her curse, kicked in with horrifying efficiency. She healed, molecule by molecule, every cell racing to knit her back together, screaming in silent agony as nerves rebuilt themselves, as tissue regenerated. She woke, hours later, perfectly whole, lying in the wreckage, a horrifying monument to her own indestructibility.

Millennia passed. The sun grew redder, the Earth colder. Humanity, in its endless cycles, fragmented, coalesced, left the planet, then eventually ceased to be. Aris Thorne, the woman who had sought to defy death, was now its last, most perfect victim.

She sat on a desolate, wind-swept plain, the ruins of a long-forgotten metropolis rising like skeletal fingers against the eternal twilight. Her skin was still smooth, her eyes still bright, though they now held the unbearable weight of billions of forgotten lives, of oceans evaporated and mountains eroded. The beauty of her eternal youth was a grotesque mockery. Her mind was a fractured crystal, glistening with an infinity of memories, none of which held meaning any longer. Her thoughts were whispers, echoes of echoes, lost in the vastness of her own consciousness.

She was still young. She would always be young. And she would always be. The universe would burn out, stars would collapse into black holes, and eventually, even those would evaporate. But Aris Thorne, the perfect, unchanging, pristine organism, would remain. A silent, screaming monument to the horror of endless existence, trapped forever in a world that had long since forgotten the meaning of the word 'life'. Her only wish was for an end that would never come.

© 2025 Mark Raines


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