The MannequinsA Story by Mark RainesA serial killer has a disturbing traitsThe first body was found in the woods behind the old Black Hollow Elementary School, where the soil was already stained with half-forgotten secrets. Ellen Voss, a 24-year-old teacher, was supposed to meet her sister for dinner. Instead, theyTitle: The Hollow Mannequins of Black Hollow found her torso, splayed across the roots of a pine tree like a grotesque offering, her head nowhere to be found. The police called it a hunting accident"until her mother pointed out the doll. It appeared the night after Ellen’s disappearance, perched on her porch swing, dressed in Ellen’s favorite yellow dress, its plastic joints frozen in a relaxed pose. The neighbors thought it was a prank until the doll spoke. No one saw who moved its lips, but the voice was undeniably Ellen’s, humming the lullaby she’d used to sing to her nieces. The doll’s head tilted, its glass eyes following the terrified women as they fled. By the third victim, the town learned to fear the dolls more than the deaths. Each victim was found decapitated, their torsos arranged in increasingly elaborate scenes"copulating mannequins posed with their partners, dolls “feeding” infants they’d never held, others “dying” in mock suicides. The killer left no clues, only a note strapped to the first torso with a safety pin: “Perfection requires sacrifice.” Claire Mercer, a journalist and Black Hollow’s most prominent native daughter, returned to the town she’d sworn to escape after her own father’s unsolved murder decades earlier. The mayor begged her to stay clear of the case, but Claire recognized the pattern"the killer was a student of Black Hollow’s history. Her father’s journal, buried in her grandmother’s attic, mentioned a child in 1987 who’d played with dolls so obsessively that his mother had hidden them all. “Thomas Harrow,” her father had scrawled in the margins. “Still out there.” Claire found Thomas in the abandoned doll factory on the town’s outskirts. The building groaned like a living thing, its windows blocked with rotting wood. Inside, the air reeked of pine resin and formaldehyde. Room after room held wax figures of the victims, their torsos grafted onto articulated mannequin frames, lifelike as if sculpted from memory. But in a final chamber, Claire saw the trophies: heads stored in iceboxes, each one missing the occipital lobe"an anatomical detail the killer had carved into his victims over the years as a calling card. Thomas emerged from the shadows, his hands stained with something darker than paint. He wore a tailor’s mask over his lower face, the kind used for ventriloquism, and his eyes gleamed behind oval spectacles. “You understand, don’t you?” he asked, his voice a disturbing blend of warmth and static. “The originals are flawed. They age, they bleed, they break. But these"” He gestured to a doll wearing Claire’s childhood sweater, its chest rising faintly as if breathing. “"these are eternal.” Claire tried to run, but the doors sealed with a hiss of pneumatic locks. She found her own torso mounted in the foyer, posed at a mirror as if admiring itself. Thomas had been watching her for years, of course. He’d saved the most intricate creation for last. By midnight, the town’s gossips swore they saw a new doll on the Mercer porch. It wore Claire’s wedding dress, its head tilted as it hummed a lullaby through lips too smooth for a real human. The police arrived too late to stop the mayor from ordering its burial, just in case"though the doll’s glass eyes followed the hearse as it left, and some claimed it blinked. Thomas Harrow was never seen again. But in every town near Black Hollow, new dolls begin appearing every autumn, their torsos stitched with the same yellow thread used in the factory. They arrive with no heads, of course. The killer has grown patient now, waiting decades between “editions.” And if you listen closely to their hum, you’ll hear it’s not a lullaby at all"it’s a safety pin scratching against bone. Perfection is eternal. You’ll see. © 2026 Mark Raines |
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