Dream scape

What is it like on the dreamscape? And will the dream ever end?

Dream scape

I sat on the gridded lines of the dream scape
I had created and destroyed many worlds
But now I was alone
I was tired
I felt no motivation to create
Why should I?
All dreams had to come to an end
Such as how all worlds would...
Does that mean that my world would cease to exist?
Would I one day wake up from the dreamscape?
I closed my eyes and wondered
The poor dreamy child that was made god
Why must he suffer so?
To be stuck in his own dreams
To have all his dreams be created
just to have to wake up in the end...
He wished he had someone teach him
To teach him how to be god
He wished he never existed
He didn't want to feel the lingering sadness
And his dream came true

Reviews

[Kai Rollins]

The child who would be god...woah. Haha. That really gripped me. Thanks for the read.

[SquinklaPsyOps]

Interesting description of a character for a fantasy novel, great work, congratulations it has possibilities to grasp audience interest.

[MADAM]

I actually was going to make this into a short story! But it didn't make it past the planning stage so u made it into a shirt poem instead^^) Instead I too a different take and mixed this story with my other poem "Creation" and made a story out of that...I don't think I'll use it so I'll probably just post it later:3