You left

There are some times when all things get present but you couldn't be happy

Over the sky there was a moon,
floating autumn cloud floating here to there,
with there color of colorless white bird,
cool breeze swiping my here,
gentle breathe freshening my soul,
dimed moon brightening the night,
all things were there for me,
but, put me in dark,

get my soul with you,you left.

Reviews

[Natasha]

few mistakes spelling wise, but other than that it was a nice short poem, it seemed to flow nicely and had a lot of imagery and descriptions nature wise

[Coyote Poetry]

Breaking up the poem make it easier to read. A lot of emotion in the poem. Pain teaches us to appreciate pleasure and good time. A sad ending to a very good poem.
Coyote

[Amanda J. S.]

Really sad poem! I really feel bad for you! hope you'll find someone else, more worthy of your love! :-)