grieving

just randomly written

mirror tell my passion
 nature inspire me
air whisper my sadness
cloudy sky grieve for me  
 but why?
am i depressed?????????????

Author's Note

just randomly written

Reviews

[Coyote Poetry]

I like your description. Good use of words allow the the reader to feel the emotion and have a good vision. Thank you for the excellent poem.
Coyote

[de_maruf]

thank you very much

[Mark]

I like how the poem tracks, and your use of font to build up to the 'cloudy sky grieve for me' Then you almost whisper the last line.
Liked it ;)

[Katherine Enma Pineappl..]

You can reduce the question marks and the colors don't at all seem appropriate for the poem but I like the thought. Your simple lines seem so deep and nice

Keep writing

[ElizabethRaine]

I really like this, a lot. The colors are distracting and the excessive '???' question marks tend to take the meaning off a bit for me. But you do have something very nice here.

[Ufi Auttorri ~ Amy C. T..]

Wow, now there's a possibility the answer to the question is, "Yes." Oh, by the way, the colors are distracting. But perhaps that's just me. However the different SIZE fonts on the different lines do seem to show a certain boldness or timidity. What do you think the color and font size add to the overall message (for you)? Otherwise, for me, it is succinct and to the point. Oh, and perhaps a few less question marks? Don't know for sure... just saying. :)

[Soul Fire]

Very nicely done.Understandable and relatable emotions.Thanks for sharing (:

[de_maruf]

thanks for reading

[Soul Fire]

you're welcome

[Dr. Wood ?]

made me smile...Is that right? I loved the last line

[khalid]

short sad but nice..

[gombeggar]

nice expression...doesn't appear at all random

[de_maruf]

thanks

[Arielle Ann]

mirror, tell my passion-is it that you are in conversation with the mirror?
or
mirror tell my passion-is that you are telling us the mirror reflects your passion-because then tell should be replaced but tells.
So that is where I got confused; apart from that well connected lines clearly stating your state of mind.nice!

[de_maruf]

what mirror say obviously i do
thanks for read it