what we doing

How can we fight what can't be seen?

It lies within, as deep as a knife is keen.

Our one true enemy, is not each other,

The enemy is ourselves, each and everyone, simply one after another

Reviews

[khalid]

nicely written, we are our own enemies

[Dayran]

A pointer in the right direction.

[Whitney Kleinhuizen]

I really love the first line, it's great!

[Shamsuddin Mazed]

Yeah......It's struggle of Life.....

[de_maruf]

hmm

[gombeggar]

...and then there wuz sings *la-dee-dee...one two three...eric the half a bee...* ;)

[gombeggar]

just felt some levity wuz needed here...carry on then

[Coyote Poetry]

Hardest weaknesses to defeat are in our mind and hearts. I like the question and the strong ending in the poem. Thank you for the excellent poem.
Coyote

[de_maruf]

thnx