Over

She has o control over me

She is out she is gone
I have never felt such bliss
is this what freedom taste like
i can now enjoy my life
She no longer haunts my dreams
No longer ruins my days
Its finally done
Its over

Author's Note

She always had control over me and i finally broke through the spell and i now control my life and my happiness

Reviews

[Katie]

She is out, she is gone
I have never felt such bliss.
Is this what freedsom tastes like.
I can now enjoy my life.
She no longer haunts my dreams,
No longer ruins me days.
It's finally done.
It's over.

Poems need punctuation too. And grammar.

It's a good poem aside from what I stated above. you express your emotion well, which is good, because its been a while since I've seen a poem that does (not from you just in general). I like the tone at the end the sense of finality. Excellent Poem, well done.

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. beautiful poem and well done ! ...

[Abbie]

i'mguessing an exgirlfriend ????

[Rachel]

hmmmmmm interesting.......

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