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If I knocked on your door would you let me in as a friend?

Horizon lightens at the eastern edge
watch the ducks upon the pond
Feel the fingers of the dawn
Chilling touch of night
gone

I know the answer is no
Once twilight is enough

Reviews

[charleybear]

very nice... could almost feel the chill of the winter

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Gorgeous prose. Some of the best I've seen in some weeks here. Well done.

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