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Everything
displayed in the forefront
Uncertain the repercussions
hasty decisions will bring
The singing stops!
"Thank-You!""Please,Please"
But the crowd roars on
The winds of salvation
Bringing or taking
I never know
A traveler in the night
A near sighted journeyman
Going unknown
May the wind take my ember
Wherever her disorder seems fit
 

Author's Note

I'd truly appreciate any comments,criticisms, or thoughts. Thank you for taking the time to view this.

Reviews

[Peter H]

a conflicted conscience. within a wild mind . of a hitchhiker running away from something i don't know what to take from this piece but it was well written :) share your writes and people will read them :)

[Morgan Purcell]

Thank you very much for taking the time to comment. I'm glad you liked it. I'm also a big fan of the poetry you've posted on this site.

[Peter H]

really , i've never seen a review from you but its good to know someone is reading my poetry subtly :)