The promise

The Promise

Love is like the whispering wind

It is where the heart has been

The roads we travel the rough shores

It’s the awakening the opening doors

To the essence of you

Your struggles, your world view

Both pain and a grey dawn

Is the promise reborn

Reviews

[Wórdsmíth]

agreed w/ words.. often times, love is full of promises but lights &/or lies as well.

[MOON]

Thank you so much

[Lorry]

And we do chase that whispering wind, trying to hear what it says and learn its ways. Hoping to get it right one day.
And who knows! Maybe this one will be the time we get it right, so keep those eyes on the prize.
So much said and felt in such a short piece. Impressive.

[MOON]

Thank you most appreciated

[Chris Shaw]

"the opening doors to the essence of you".Dear Moon, this is delightfully uplifting and full of new promise. Hope you are well. Keep safe.

Chris

[X]

of lovely poems and promises... just make sure it does not wither away in the whispering wind to the great Promise Graveyard in Heavens...:) Nice write!