Autumn Wonders

Let's paint autumn with orange, yellow and gold.

Maple leaves swayed in autumn breeze
Cosmos and marigold danced with bliss
There the monarch butterflies played, fluttering their saffron wings
Listen to oriole's mellifluous tweet
As little children eat persimmon so sweet
Silently, they watch the golden painted sky of sunset

Author's Note

For entry. :) Spare a time to read. Thank you

Reviews

[Coyote Poetry]

Amazing use of description. You create beautiful places and visions. Nice flow of thoughts led to a good ending. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

[yuhee]

Thank you very much. I'm very flattered to know your thoughts.

[Coyote Poetry]

Was my pleasure and you are welcome.

[Addict With a Pen]

I really like this! I love how the descriptions you used all gave off an orange and yellow bright and happy type of color. It's really pretty how you painted Autumn, as you said. Everything you used creates an image for fall, from the leaves, to the marigolds, and even the persimmon. Everything fit together nicely. This really is a beautiful write!

[yuhee]

Thank you so much for appreciating it.

[CAPOLAVORO]

You've truly gone way high on the descriptive level for the autumn season MP. Well done on this one.

[yuhee]

Nah. Not really. It's just I got some inspiration. Thanks for the kind comment. :)

[CAPOLAVORO]

Oh.. nice inspirational stuffs does lead you a long way in writing.

[yuhee]

Really it is...