Ghost of Myself

Personal.

Ghost of myself

Is that you?

Giving all pure values for free

Ghost of myself, do you hear me?

Can only my subconscious see clearly?

Ghost of myself, do you enjoy this opaque covering?

Covering of soul

Just a reckless soul

Ghost of myself

Is this me?

Author's Note

ignore grammar problems!

Reviews

[r]

this is a nice poem.... easily relateable

[Manda]

wow this was really good! I really enjoyed this! well done

[Elissa; the genuine art..]

This is magnificent!
I truly enjoyed reading this.
It was fast paced and beautifully written.
Also, quite thought provoking.
It made me reflect upon myself.
Amazing write!
[adding to my favorites]

-Elissa :D

[Poetic Beauty]

I have felt like this. There are times in my life that I don't feel my normal self. Like it is locked up deep down inside where no one not ever I can find it. You have expressed this clearly in this poem. The flow is a little rough that isn't a big deal. The content of the poem is get and the layout is good. I like this poem.