Fairy Tales

This girl reminds me of me sometimes...

Crown upon head

Silk garments

Flying curls

Running to a castle

To find her prince.

Is this what she wants?

Her fairy tale.

Her dreams of another life

are hard to reach

Once she's there,

The prince

Isn't a prince

At all

Not even a frog.

The prince is

the villian

Reviews

[Liva Mary]

This small poem give you an image of that beautiful princess running in a castle with a worried look. Then at the end her expressions changes into a horrified looked. You can just imagine the twisted fate that the princess would never suspect. This is such a nice poem! Keep writing.

[Elissa; the genuine art..]

The ending was so intense
"The prince is
the villain"
That really stopped me in my tracks.
Yet another amazing write.
Can't wait to read more!

-Elissa :D

[Luna Northstar]

Wow, I love it.

[Keevan]

i like this, Maddy! =D great job! your poems are awesome!