Dishonesty

About a personal thing I'm going through.

You tell me

I'm sweet

I'm kind

I'm cute

I'm fun

You love me.

Dishonesty begins.

Disturbance takes place.

No more right

All wrong.

Only bad.

And you no longer say

I'm sweet

I'm kind

I'm cute

I'm fun

You love me.

No good in dishonesty

Just pain

Reviews

[Ki]

Has anyone else gone through this?

[Coyote Poetry]

I like the poem. Beginning is sweet and nice. Later with time. Things fall apart. I believe we need to walk slow and easy into a friendship. So we shall know what we are getting to. A very good poem. Thank you.
Coyote

[Luna Northstar]

Short, sweet, and perfect!