Never Fall

You gotta do what you love

I'm falling off
The mountain
Hanging on by a thread
I see my life flash before my eyes
You're at the top
Grinning at my pain
This is what you've been waiting for
To push me down
End me
Maybe I shouldn't even resist
Maybe I should just fall
But I'll never fall
I'm stronger than that

Reviews

[Anonymous]

Finally! A confidence poem! Haven't read one of these in a while!
This was a brilliant, beautiful story, and you unfolded it in an amazing perspective. A cliffside mountain! Such creativity :D I liked it! Excellent work!

[Alexis]

When I read
"You're at the top
Grinning at my pain"
I kind of freaked out. But once I finished it, I felt a little more reassured (if that's the right word...) Once again, you've written another wonderful poem. I enjoy reading your writings!