Chapter (15) SO MY CHILDREN WILL REMEMBER.

I WANTED TO LEAVE SOMETHING TO SHOW I EXISTED, ONCE.

I thought I'd write a book, my kids had said I should

I thought I'd try some poetry, didn't know if I could.

My son said  get the internet, to help you find a way

And now I'm sitting writing, almost every single day.

 

My first was not my greatest, it really didn't rhyme

My second took forever, it was a waste of time.

But now I'm really getting, what this writing's all about

And I keep on getting  compliments that make me want to shout.

 

I wrote about my early life, and 'bout my time in France

about the highs and lows we had, and fun that came by chance.

The places that I visited, the new friends that I made,

In countries that were new to me, and sometimes wish I'd stayed.

 

Today I finished writing, my very first real book

I couldn't guess how difficult or how much time it took.

I hope the people read it and give me good reviews,

For now I understand how a writer pays his dues.

 

So come on all you writers let's fill up all this space

With stories full of wonder and poems full of grace.

It's ok to make us laugh, to bring out sadness too

So set up word and start to type, we'd love to hear from you.

 

Author's Note

COMMENTS WELCOME.

Reviews

[Kathy Van Kurin]

MAD ENGLISHMAN,
"So my children will remember" really hit home for me. I have not been writing for years and years but when I do it is so satisfying! I hope and wonder if my own grown children will want to read what I write. Your poem is a comfort. Thank you so much!!.............Kathy PS I love to read new writers every so often and first writings as well. Again it was a pleasure.............

[MAD ENGLISHMAN]

Thank you so much Kathy. This was an early poem, about 3 years ago. My kids did say I should write down my stories and that is how I started to write. I hope you will find time to read more of my pieces, especially the more recent short stories. I'd appreciate feedback. Clive

[Teeya]

This read was truly a smile! The rhyme scheme made it playful but inspirational. Very nice work:)

[MAD ENGLISHMAN]

Thank you so much for this lovely review.

[Rose of many colours]

I thought to read something from these parts. I enjoy this piece,

[MAD ENGLISHMAN]

Hi Rose,
Thank you for reading I'm glad you enjoyed it. Sometimes inspiration just sneaks up on you and you have to write it down.

[VALORMORE DE PLUME]

This is a fun story in poetic form. Could be set to music. The grand adventure has begun. I too was born in 52.

[MAD ENGLISHMAN]

Hi my friend.
Thanks for reading. I've gotten over the block I had for a week or so but I'm looking for a subject to be a bit different.

[ASHIDASH]

Nice poem. I read this more than four times because of the way it rhymes and the simple theme it carries. No words to say. I truly love this poem

[MAD ENGLISHMAN]

Why thank you. I like to write in this easy style. I've had a block for a week now and can't write anything worthwhile. Your review has cheered me up a lot. Thank you. Clive.

[Marcovy Duwin]

This is good. It rhymes and deliver well. Liked it

[MAD ENGLISHMAN]

Thank you for reading, and for reviewing. Best regards. Clive

[stars are far]

that did ryhme well, and i say that because i find it hard to write a rhymed poem, i loved this so much.,. and i agree on your last stanza. this is the most peaceful place i feel in my days, i can be myslef without felling shame..
thanks for great write

[MAD ENGLISHMAN]

Thank you again for reading. When I started on here back earlier this year I had no idea that so many wonderful people would read the things I wanted to write. Most of my 'friends' on here are so much better writers than I. I too come here to 'talk' and express my inner thoughts. We're so glad that you are here too. Very best regards. Clive.

[stars are far]

I had the same thought too, i guess 3 years ago, when i joined,, i wasnt even good.. but lots of nice friends over here supported me.. thank you so much dear friend : ) so gald to meet you here too

[Tate Morgan]

it sure does take a long time to master the art of writing i like the limerickal way your verses ran throughout.Some day your children will read them all and smile

[MAD ENGLISHMAN]

Thank you for that comment. I think my strength lies in light hearted verse. regards dear friend.

[Tate Morgan]

you do this well and i liked it

[Rose of many colours]

Thank you for the invitation. This is a letter of invitation, encouragement, of the birth of an expedition etc. Wonderfull

[MAD ENGLISHMAN]

Thank you for reading. I love to write. It doesn't have to be Shakespeare.
Best regards.
read moreThank you for reading. I love to write. It doesn't have to be Shakespeare.
Best regards.
clive.