Chapter (17) WONDERLAND MY FOOT.

WONDERLAND MY FOOT

 

Alice down a hole she fell

From earth above down into hell.

She grabbed a root her fall to check

But missed and fell and broke her neck.

 

White rabbit ran for safety sought

Ran out of time and he was caught

Cut off his head the red queen cries

And use the rest for tasty pies.

 

Mad hatter sat so tells the fable

With friends around a picnic table

The dormouse died in boiling water

A cat he grinned to see the slaughter

 

Two fat boys their bellies loaded

Ate so much and then exploded.

A caterpillar in a tree

Split his sides and then flew free.

Reviews

[Tinotenda Nyevedzanai]

I love this new dark twist on wonderland always enjoy reading your petry you're one of my favorite writers on this site keep em' coming!

[MAD ENGLISHMAN]

Thank you so much Ally. I've not had a deal of time lately but I'm getting back into it. So pleased you like my stuff.

[Marie]

I don't think Lewis Carroll would appreciate this.

[MomzillaNC]

What a wonderfully fluid little assault on the fairytale! :D

[Frieda P]

OH MY, I love this fractured fairy tale...so cleverly spun, great read Clive!

Gotta love that title too...

[MAD ENGLISHMAN]

Thank you so much. I'm glad you enjoyed it.
I'm adding a few more today, maybe you'll find time to read them.

[Frieda P]

I already did, you're on a creative roll, I really enjoyed this one....and your tree, magnificent.