Chapter (16) WE ARE A PIN PRICK.

This is our world.

This small blue dot in the vastness of space.

If you think we are alone, we are not,

but WE are called the human race.

Evolution's guide made the strong to live and the weak to die,

And in their turn all things will change through time.

But only we made weapons to kill and make our people cry.

Not natures reason or rhyme,

and she can't ask.

Why ?

Reviews

[Cindy Marietta]

Absolutely loved reading this. Has a fantastic idea behind it and you chose the perfect words to describe the madness and insignificance of ourselves. Beautifully done!

[MAD ENGLISHMAN]

Thank you so much.

[Mikayla_Stagg]

This is beautiful and very true. Greatly done.

[MAD ENGLISHMAN]

This is one of my more serious works. I'm glad it works.

[Confuser]

Oh wow, I loved it, it is wonderful to read a poem that everyone can relate to AND gives us a wonderful message and something to think about. Quite a writing. Bravo to you. Thank you. You pulled me in from the beginning. And you are so right in your message.

[MAD ENGLISHMAN]

Thank you for a wonderful review. I'm pleased you enjoyed it.

[Confuser]

You're so welcome. Thank you.

[Terpsichore]

We were gifted this beautiful planet and we have no need to behave as we do. It's that aberrant gene again; seems mankind is somehow programmed to destroy.

As you write, no reason or rhyme. T

[MAD ENGLISHMAN]

You may well be right. thanks for reading.

[OliviaOwens]

Simple yet powerful words.

[MAD ENGLISHMAN]

It was one of those moments I just had to write it down. i'm glad you enjoyed it.

[Baby Ricochet]

Kinda deep this is. Good poetry my fine English friend.

[MAD ENGLISHMAN]

Nice to hear from you again. thanks for the compliment. Hope you have a great Christmas. Clive.

[stars are far]

That demands thinking , and it was one good piece. keep it coming :)

[MAD ENGLISHMAN]

Many thanks for reading. I feel strongly about our world but I am a lonely voice in a whirlewind of shouts.

[stars are far]

always my pleasure, and you know if you have companion you will feel worse, because people will think you are weak, when you are just trying to say whats going...

[Brittany Zedalis]

╰☆╮I think about this subject a lot. Thank you for sharing.╰☆╮

[MAD ENGLISHMAN]

Thank you for reading. It is a subject that worries me a lot.

[icelandicblue]

A very good question. We are truly but a speck but our arrogance keeps us from seeing it.

[MAD ENGLISHMAN]

Thank you for the great comments.

[Marie]

Very profound poem. Only human being are destroying the earth we live on.

[MAD ENGLISHMAN]

I feel so helpless being one so small.