Chapter (4) SUMMER DAYS, DARK DESIRES.

DARK DESIRES

 

Tyres on gravel groan, footsteps crunch and I with stomach churning,

Enter the house, desires burning.

For this moment, this special moment,

I have waited, and soon all my desires will be satiated.

I long for her, like the sun I burn for her,

and she waits, patient and knowing her fates.

I cannot longer wait.

This surging desire, urging me ever forward

I stand before the door.

Ripped shirt ejected to the floor.

My naked torso in beads of sweat dressed.

Muscles stressed the door opens.

I see her, I want her, I need her

And she is mine and mine alone.

I lift her, gentle and with care

She is light, lighter than air to me and

With ease she is laid upon the table

And at last I am able

to take her, to love her, to consume her.

Her cover removed she is ready for me,

I on my knees before her,

She is open and waiting, and I

Shivering, quivering, anticipating this moment

move my head towards her.

Her scents fill my nostrils as I close to her.

My tongue reaches and I taste her darkness,

Her creamy delights assault my senses

and my mouth sings.

I am in ecstasy.

 

And that, is how you eat a tub of Chocolate Ice cream.

Author's Note

ALL COMMENTS PLEASE.

Reviews

[Chidoriflower]

Whoa I thought how erotic this is!! It's so good X3 didn't expect the ending. Amazing as per :)

[MAD ENGLISHMAN]

I'm pleased you enjoyed it. I love to see the reactions of folk. I think it says more about the readers mind than it does about the writer.

[Gee]

Aww s**t,I thought it was going to be a steak and onion pie......Had me going right to the end.Nicely done

[MAD ENGLISHMAN]

So pleased you enjoyed it. thanks.

[Great Aunt Astri]

Well well well, I laughed loud and long. All my anticipations melted down into chocolate!

[MAD ENGLISHMAN]

It is possible to be in love with ice cream.

[ANTO]

I'm ready to scream (no not for ice-cream) - I'm sitting like at the last line about to go "Mature Banner" you crazy Englander then the punchline - cracked me right up.
This is like a Marks and Sparks meets 50 shades advert lol.
You card !!
Excellent bit of whimsy (secretly i think your dipping your cautious toe in those waters though... you know the ones.. lol)
Class !! :DD

[MAD ENGLISHMAN]

Thanks my friend. I was hoping for some reactions. Seriously, do you think I should mark it mature content? I was a bit worried.

[ANTO]

No I don't think you do mate. I was thinking that the whole way through reading it then the punch line made me realise that you're letting the reader do all the thinking here so ...I think i need a mature banner on my mind instead lol... it's all good lol - nicely done. Bait and switch lol

[MAD ENGLISHMAN]

Thanks pal, I'll leave it. See what other reactions I get.

[ANTO]

No worries - btw doesnt the review to view ratio round here stink?

[MAD ENGLISHMAN]

Yup. Some of my stuff got hundred views and 2 or 3 comments. I try to say something when I read a work, even if I don't think it's very good.

[MAD ENGLISHMAN]

Example this poem now on 47 reads. Got ONE comment. Yours.