Chapter (5) THE HAPPY BEETLE

BEETLE

 

A Happy Little Beetle

was sitting in the sun,

then the Happy Little Beetle

went off to have some fun.

The Happy Little Beetle

went crawling on a log,

But then the Happy Little Beetle,

Was eaten by a Frog.

 

Perhaps the poor Little Beetle should have stayed at home.

 

© 2016 MAD ENGLISHMAN 

Reviews

[Robert Haigh]

Ha-ha! A bad day for the beetle! A fun write.

[MAD ENGLISHMAN]

There are days I feel like this beetle. Glad you enjoyed it.

[Nisreen]

Lol
Makes me think if that beetle was a man
Would he suffer so much ??

[MAD ENGLISHMAN]

Ha, there may be some deeper metaphors in there somewhere.

[Nisreen]

I see them with much clarity ......

[MAD ENGLISHMAN]

That's because you're a woman. Us men have to be shown the way.

[Nisreen]

i hear ya ;)

[Baby Ricochet]

Beetles are cool. Good poem. Cute

[MAD ENGLISHMAN]

Thanks Baby. My first book of poems is published. Working on a book of silly stuff for kids.

[wordman]

yes he should have,oh well to late now

[MAD ENGLISHMAN]

Ha ha ha ha ha. yup lesson learned too late.

[Terpsichore]

Great fun poem, with a brilliantly subtle message contained that tells all kids to take care just in there is a something not very nice lurking around the corner.

T

[MAD ENGLISHMAN]

Glad you understood. thank you for reading.

[MomzillaNC]

LOL! It’s rather reminiscent of Guiterman poetry!

[MAD ENGLISHMAN]

Thank you Denise. I'll take that as a good compliment. Hope the children like it when I get into a book.

[MomzillaNC]

You’re welcome. I know kids will like it. Are you familiar with Arthur Guiterman?

[MomzillaNC]

The trick will be getting parents to buy it!

[zaisham9393]

I enjoyed reading this.
Thank You for sharing :))!