Sure To Follow

When night masks morality 
Day must in turn show it 
If love hides disloyalty 
Then hate must reveal it 
Equivalence will force it's way 
Like a new king hungry for wealth 
An unavoidable burden 
Attached uniquely to each adjective 
One does not remove the balance 
Merely delays and adjusts it 

Reviews

[asdarkeyesclose]

'If love hides disloyalty
Then hate must reveal it '

I liked the similie 'like a new king hungry for wealth'. i'm always looking for good similies and metaphors I think they take writing to a different level. I really enjoyed your poem. fantastic.